In Part 4 of Susan Uttendorfsky’s wonderful series on editing, we learn about Character Name Consistency and the benefit of using spreadsheets to keep track of character names, etc. while we’re writing…
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Character Name Consistency
A book I edited had a main character with a name of, say, Paul Charleston, who was a vice president of marketing. Within the first fifty pages, the author had referred to this one character by:
Paul
Paulie
Paulie-Wallie
Mr. Charleston
Paulie C.
Mr. C.
Mr. VP
Mr. Veep
the vice president
the veep
Mr. Marketing
…and probably ten others I haven’t remembered. Imagine how confused a reader would have been, as there was no discernible reason for the name changes. In addition, should the author have decided midway to change this character’s name, it would have been impossible to change them all with a simple Find/Replace operation. The risk of missing one—or more than one—was very…
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Many thanks for sharing Tina 😀 XXX
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Welcome, Chris 🙂 XXX
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Hi T, just trying out a few blogs, still working (12 hours now) on big computer issues. xo
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It worked here, Deb. Came through as dgkaye ❤
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